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Another inking practice.
11" x 17"
done with Winsor&Newton #2 and #3 Series 7 brushes

Cover of Aquaman # 7
Pencils by Ivan Reis :iconivanreisdc:
Inks by Me!

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Aquaman and Other Characters © DC Comics

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*Sol-Caninus Apr 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
Technically, in terms of application, great work! But now for the tonal composition. . . .

A good composition will pull together, tonally, when viewed from afar, or when reduced to the size of a postage stamp. This one breaks apart. It does that because the contrasts are equally intense and evenly distributed. As a result, contrast does not identify and support the center of interest (CI).

A good rule of thumb is to put the most intense contrast at the primary center of interest - make sure that nothing else in the composition equally competes with it for attention.

So one way to approach a fix is to graduate the intensity of contrasting elements using more gray tones for secondary and tertiary CIs and save the hard black/white contrasts for the primary CI

This is why pencils must be interpreted by the inker, because until the ink is applied, one cannot fully appreciate which way the composition will go. And it is why spotting blacks and deciding the tonal scheme was traditionally the inker's responsibility. (Reis, Finch, doesn't matter who. Pencils are only preliminary compositions. You have authority when it comes to defining the tonal scheme, so don't be afraid to use it that power! ;) :thumbsup:) )
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:iconadr-ben:
*adr-ben Apr 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for the compliment on my technique and the tips about the tonal scheme and the CI.
I'll sure have them in mind from now on!
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*Sol-Caninus Apr 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
:thumbsup: :)
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~xKeren Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome! I love this, I'm going to be using this as a reference as I learn how to ink.
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*adr-ben Feb 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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*knytcrawlr Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow dude, some really amazing work here!
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*adr-ben Oct 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks brother!
You've got some nice works on your gallery!
If you see something here you would like to color, just send me a note with your e-mail. I'll send you a High-res file..
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~AudioBull Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
freaking good job inking this dude, lovin' the detail :D
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*adr-ben Oct 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot Sam! I always appreciate your comments!
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